The Official Writing Challenge
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10/23/15
Excellent!
10/28/15
Well done! I like familiar stories written from a different POV. This portrays Nicodemus's thoughts well.
10/28/15
This was well done. I enjoyed it, and the language and emotion you conveyed.
10/28/15
Loved your use of the topic. Right on. With excellent descriptive passages and dialogue.
Congratulations on ranking 19th overall! Happy Dance!