The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this. I love your subtle sense of humor and found myself chuckling as I read. Personally, I like the human touch of the angels, though others may say it's not entirely Biblical. Because we are humans, we think like humans. It's impossible to truly understand things like angels and how they work. By humanizing them, you make them relatable. They understand us. I can't help but think how much more Jesus understands us since he actually lived as a human. What other god can say that? Great job on this.
06/15/15
I really enjoyed this story. The subtle humor was entertaining. I wasn't sure if the angels were meant to help or hurt at the beginning of the writing. It had a few twists and turns to make it interesting from beginning to end.
06/17/15
I'm not so sure that angels ever rely on luck - or accuse each other of relying on it - but this was a fun read with some good twists along the way.