The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/15
Delightful and compelling, sweet story - with a perfect title. Enjoyed this very much.
A lovely, gentle story with some deep thoughts. I enjoyed this.
It seems you have a dangling participle towards the end in 'my husband passing away a year ago, and living on Social Security.' They seem to trap us all.