The Official Writing Challenge
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09/05/14
Nicely done. I enjoyed this piece of reality that almost everyone can relate to.

God bless~
09/08/14
Delightful, with on-the-dot characterization and a beautiful word picture and lesson. Enjoyed this much!
09/11/14
Love this profile of the window of hope that appears in those fragile communication moments with teenagers - that expand and deepen when respect and humour enter the mix. Great work
This is a lovely exchange between mother and daughter. Oh I know the look that only a teen can master. I especially liked how the mother taught the lecture without coming off as preachy. I also liked how the girl figured it out instead of needing Mom to fully explain it. It's a delightful balance. Congratulations on your EC! Happy Dance!
09/16/14
Oh this was an adorable interchange. I think you did a marvelous job executing the theme.