The Official Writing Challenge
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10/21/11
Well, I love this to start with because I wanted to name my puppy "Pickle" but my husband and kids objected! This is a sweet story. I liked it.
10/21/11
Sweet sentimental and nicely done. I enjoyed it. God Bless~
10/22/11
Oh this was such a tender and touching story – how could a story about a sweet child and two sweet puppies not touch my heart to begin with and then throw in the wonderful message about God as opposed to Google and it had me for sure! LOL I could easily see this developed into a charming children’s story, it would make a great children’s book! Great job!
10/22/11
Now here's a Google story! Sweet, on topic, lovely story and believable. Good read.

Mona
This is an awesome story and quite clever. The beginning pulled on my heart. The ending was a tad predictable but still quite satisfying.
Awww, cute story. I love the descriptions of the scruffy dog.