The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a lovely prayer. It flows nicely and has a wonderful message.

Also, if you're part of the FW's group on Facebook and would like to receive more comments, go to the page and look for a post called Drop a Hint. You can leave a clue and others will hopefully see it and come, read, and comment on poem. If you're not a member of the group, you can join! Hope to see you there!
I like your use of the recurring soul theme.