The Official Writing Challenge
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12/08/24
A very heart-warming story.
12/11/24
Love the kitty's name!
12/12/24
It amazes me that kids often think of others before themselves. This story should have placed much higher, Jack. But, with so many superb writers in this level, I think the judges have a VERY hard time deciding whose piece is best.

I love how you showed - rather than told - his poorness, the lack of affection from his too busy mother, and his joy of giving.

Keep up the wonderful writing you do. I enjoy reading your work.