The Official Writing Challenge
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06/09/24
I always love familiar stories told by the characters who lived them. It really brings it to life. And the title is apt; the people whose lives Jesus touched and transformed and the lives He continues to change are indeed countless. Good job.
I enjoyed this biblical nonfiction. You did a nice job of highlighting Jesus' miracles.
06/11/24
Thanks for sharing how it may have been to witness Jesus’ miracles.
06/16/24
Congratulations on your EC. You've done well with recounting the Bible events through the eyes of the man Jesus healed. One 'red-ink' comment. I think it should be 'the man that lay..', or 'the man that had lain there', rather than 'the man that laid...'. Nonetheless, you have told it well.