The Official Writing Challenge
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01/27/23
I enjoyed this story a lot. Great central character good message. Well done.
Touching story and love your MC's voice. Thanks for sharing.
Blessings
I'd never heard the song, so I had to Google it. You did an excellent job of bringing it to life. I really enjoyed it. You definitely nailed the buy topic. I don't remember seeing a bye, but I certainly could've missed it. There's a spot where you have dialog inside of dialog that should have single quotation marks instead of double, but that's a little thing. You grabbed me from the beginning, held my attention to the very end and made my heart smile.
Congratulations on your EC. Happy Dance!
It's also great to see you back writing here again after a bit! ?