The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/23
Wow! Your story grips and shakes me. Well, well-written and impactful.
Powerful! Thanks for sharing. Blessings
01/18/23
A wonderful piece. Well written and powerful. Great job.
Wow this is a stunning piece. I have tears in my thought. Growing up, I remember reading Anne Frank's Diary and Number the Stars. They seemed so Far from the world I lived in. Now as we are nearing 100 years of history, it seems farther away yet closer too. And stories like this need to be written lest we ever forget. You did an outstanding job of balancing German and English, allowed and aloud, and showing not telling. This is an all-time favorite and I hope you will consider writing more of the story, for it is excellent.
Congratulations on ranking 2nd overall. It's a stunning piece!