The Official Writing Challenge
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12/03/22

Excellent! Splendidly descriptive. The 'topicality,' the style, content and tone, the flow...are all good. The entry has, really, ministered to me. Well-done. Do it again and again...



This is a nice retelling of what Peter must have been feeling. I liked how you pulled in the topic too. Be careful about switching tenses. In the beginning you switched from past to present to past again. I liked how you laid it out too. Even though I'm very familiar with the story the importance of the number 3 really stood out to me. I think Jesus asked 3 times to help make up for the 3 denials. Your take about lambs growing made me stop and think too. I always enjoy pieces that make me think.