The Official Writing Challenge
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09/01/22
I loved this! Great title and wonderful encouraging poem. I liked the repetition of the same line over and over. Wouldn’t change a thing. Great job.
I can imagine! But it was joyous to read your words and share the wonder. Blessed.
The thymic and repetitive ‘can you imagine’ reminded me of my Australian land in its almost palpable heartbeat. Can You Imagine A Saviour?
Thank you.
09/04/22
I also enjoyed the repetition of the lines of “Can you imagine going on a trip?” It was a great intro to the next two lines.

No Bags to Pack is well constructed and communicated well. It flowed smoothly from beginning to end.

The last two lines in stanza one I pictured a person confused and probably think what’s going on? I can’t look back.

The last two lines in the last stanza there is no confusion just Joy, love and peace and sitting with Jesus.

Thank you for your work and keep writing.

Congratulations Jim. Lots more to come.