The Official Writing Challenge
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Captivating story!
03/15/22
Twists straightened by God's grace. A powerful story, well told.
This was an intriguing story. Congratulations on your first place EC! Happy Dance!
Congrats!
Congratulations, Philippa, on your first place EC for this timely tale that reminds us that things are not always as they seem, and that there but for the grace of God go we.
03/18/22
Congrats on your first placing for a well-compiled story with such a strong message
03/19/22
Congratulations on 1st place EC win! Woohoo! 21st Century Charles Dickens short story novelette. Well done! :-)
03/22/22
Congratulations on placing first.
Excellent writing. Your story flowed smoothly. It was clearly written and communicated.

The main characters were introduced quickly and enough background for me to know them.

Great beginning and ending.