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I could really relate to this. I've had a death phobia my entire life because of many of the things you mentioned. As a kid, I thought Heaven would be boring like church seemed to me as a little girl. I too focused on new death experiences and actually had almost one over 10 years ago that added to my perspective. You've done a great job of pulling me in right away and you make the reader stop and think which is always good. Congratulations on ranking 11th overall. Happy Dance!