The Official Writing Challenge
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04/29/21
Definitely not an Innocent Man! But an engaging tale nevertheless. I enjoyed the repetition at the very end.
You pulled me in right away and kept me right to the end. You wrote on topic in a fresh way and delivered a clear important message.
05/06/21
You did a great job of creating a villian with humanity.