The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a nice storystory. It had me smiling in all of the right places. Although I could see the ending coming, I still enjoyed your unique take on the topic.
It's fun to relish in the grand surprises of life. Enjoy it while it lasts is a mindset that doesn't happen too often.. This was a delightful piece.
Great story! I like your use of descriptive language to paint your word pictures. Like a previous comment said, the ending was sort of expected, but this is still a sweet story.
Loved the "too good to be true" feel about this whole story, and how you turned Surfers Paradise into Surfers Paradox! Well done.
Great storytelling ability. It was great to have a common name like Smith so you got a penthouse suite.
This is such a clever take and ever so well told. Great piece!
Love this story Ellen, it really brings a smile. Really well written and very enjoyable.
Nicely done.

God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 11th overall! Happy Dance!