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My apologies - hit the wrong button - this is not Fiction!
I liked this the first time I read it, and liked it even more the second--to grasp the pictures you painted of symbolism of war versus God's created beauty and the lesson from the children who chose God's creation.
12/06/14
"Silhouetted ‘gainst the sky
the heavy statue’s grim,
but round its base
soft waters lap
and ducks serenely swim."

I loved this image of opposites. Your poem pictures clearly the importance of child-like faith and hope, if we don't want to be overwhelmed by early terrors.

Thank you for the encouragement.
This is beautiful. I love how you allowed me to see this through your eyes and through the eyes of the children.
12/07/14
I've been dabbling in poetry and I haven't come anywhere near this beautiful piece. There is heartache and hope and encouragement to cast our eyes on the good things. Loved this!
Congratulations! Happy Dance!
12/11/14
Congrats,

God bless~
Delighted ti see this in EC!