The Official Writing Challenge
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The magic in this is the interaction between the characters: the Dad's proclamation concerning the horse, the Molly's misunderstanding, the mother's recruiting the Dad to help with clean-up because he referred to her as a horse, the dad's defense that at least he didn't call her a nag. LOL to that! And I loved that you referred to the little baker as a Little Martha Stewart! How clever! This is so perfect for the topic! :)
I really enjoyed this sweet domestic story with its touches of humor. Well written and a great use of the topic.
Clever, enjoyable and completely on topic.

Great job!

God Bless~
A very delightful -could have happened story.

I appreciated the teaching it gives to parents on how to handle "messy" situations with children. No screaming or name calling.

Also the teaching of children to really listen fully to directions or permissions.

It would be fun to read this one a second time.
Been there. Done that with a granddaughter. They never stop horsin around no matter what generation they live in. Well done. I could see it happening.
Great story. Loved it. Congratulations on your win.
Your story was a smile maker! I could see the whole mess so clearly. Well done and congratulations on your 2nd overall ribbon.
Congrats! God bless~