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04/15/10
Awww! Very sweet story...the only thing I stumbled on was the rap music coming from a cell phone of someone who had been married for 40 years... nice twist though...I thought the husband had died.
04/16/10
So sweet! I loved the ending.
04/16/10
I enjoyed this beautiful story. Well written.
My kids are suffering break-ups after many months. I can't imagine the pain after 40 years. I really liked how the old love letters brought them both to their senses. Very well written and realistic.
A very sweet romance. I had a difficult time reconciling their ages with the circumstances (rap music, his job), but I just loved the plot and ending. Really nice entry.
04/19/10
This sweet story left me wondering why Wyatt and Marta separated after all those years. Definitely a detail worth mentioning.
04/20/10
Sweet story. I, too, wondered why the couple had separated. There didn't seem to be any clues in the story to say that there was conflict between them. Great characterizations!