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02/19/09
Well-researched. The exquisite beauty and intricate construction of the Taj (built without modern tools) is difficult to describe in words or even pictures.
02/19/09
A fascinating story. I knew some very basic details, but had never read the complete background on the Taj. What causes pain is to think that people who visit the Taj might actually think that in a building they will find the forgiveness only Christ can give. Nicely done.
02/20/09
LOVE the title, and extremely well-researched and fascinating. And, of course, GOTTA love that last line!
02/21/09
Nice, a history lesson wrapped in a love story. Loved it.
Very creative lesson on India.
With your wonderfully descriptive writing, I felt like I had seen this wonderful memorial to a special love. How sad it is, though, that people will believe that a monument can take away their sins.