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“Miss Ruby, how you doin? You comfortable? “
“George!”
“Miss Ruby, it’s Nathan, just comin round to check on you.”
“George, there was something I wanted to ask you. Something about the pump at the kitchen sink. I can’t quite seem to recall just what it was.”
“Your water pitcher’s dry, Miss Ruby. Lemme fill it up for you.”
“Thank you, sweetheart. You always know what I need, and take care of it before I even realize I need it myself. You’re the best husband, George.”
“Nah, Miss Ruby, I’m just the nurse’s aid. Nathan, remember?” Nathan scooped ice into the water pitcher from the cooler on his cart, then ran water in from the tap in the small bathroom.
“George, do you remember pumping water by hand? I don’t know why, but I just thought of that old pump in our kitchen. I haven’t thought about that in years. Oh, thank you George! How did you know I was thirsty?”
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It might have been stronger if you put the last line even closer to the stream of thought.
Well done.