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11/15/07
Beautifully written. Your words have comforted me.
11/15/07
This is SO powerful, and such wonderfully vivid imagery. Excellent.
11/16/07
Thank you for the much needed encouragement. Spot on! God bless.
11/21/07
You take the reader from deep despair to over flowing peace,beautifully written.
11/22/07
You have SO MUCH Bible truth from MANY different passages in this. It's amazing. You must be a theologian! Your dark moments of the soul (beginning section) is hauntingly beautiful. I love the imagery and allusion in this, "Rise up by the pool of Bethesda.
God will hold you - you will not fall." Beautiful, well-thought out writing!
11/26/07
"Your soul is among lions;
Defended by God." Very nice use of imagery.