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01/19/07
This felt real. & you made me sit up straight as I read about posture!
01/21/07
This is lovely - especially the ending. Your little details make this piece feel so real and atmospheric. I was truly blessed by this.
Great title, atmosphere and message. Well done.
01/21/07
I too, enjoyed this lovely memoir. Your story belongs to all who have reaped the fruits of discipline. You bring the reader into your setting and make us care. Great work.
This is a treasure! Your detail is incredible, and the setting so well-developed I felt I was in the room! I love the life-lessons you outlined as well.