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10/24/24
As a cat lover I did enjoy this story and am happy Pogo has a forever home
10/25/24
I loved this story from the viewpoint of the cat.
I really enjoyed this piece. It made me smile and reminded me of my own once feral kitten. I'm a sucker for a twist ending. It would have been awesome if you didn't reveal the MC was a cat until near the end. Just changing a few words could turn this into a surprise ending that the reader has to reread to catch the clues. Just my thoughts though. I think you did a nice job of showcasing the topic and developing your MC. And you made me smile. That's a great thing to do.