The Official Writing Challenge
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08/23/24
Thought-provoking essay.
A good start - to fully flush out your excellent points I suggest including the peace provided between God and man through Christ's sacrifice.
Blessings
08/24/24
Interesting points raised . I would like to see them fleshed out a little more for full impact.
08/24/24
Very relevant points about self parading being at the root of conflict and about Jesus being our peacemaker.
If you could elaborate some more on both the points, it would be even better.

I love every word. Beautifully written yet in such an understandable manner.
I hope this does well.