The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved your light analogies. Our souls were made to be flooded with the Light of Christ! Thanks for uplifting words.
03/14/23
Interesting analogy of power outage and soul darkness!
You have a great message here. I liked the verses you used to back up your message. Make sure verses are in quotation marks or italics though. One thing that could make this even stronger would be to stick to just one voice. You vary from second person (you) to first person singular (I) to plural (we). In my opinion telling it from the first person would be most powerful because you could share how these things impacted you personally. You have the foundation for a great Bible study or small group lesson. You did a nice job of focusing on the main topic word soul and including sole too.