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Topic: Hear / Here (01/26/23)
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TITLE: The Street | Previous Challenge Entry
By John Puckett
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Come over here and listen in
The street is busy
Awful din
But one of God’s true children stands
And cries aloud, ‘Hear His command’.
A faithful few encourage him
To tell the world
About their sin.
Good News will come, but first of all
They must acknowledge Adam’s fall.
Come, hear the Gospel, God’s true word
He sent his Son,
Christ Jesus, Lord
To suffer death upon the Tree
To give us life abundantly.
Come over here, the preacher hear,
And listen now
His words are clear,
And take them in, the glorious facts
Clear stated in his hand-out tracts.
This is no pointless speaker’s stand,
Eternal issues
God has planned,
Though time is precious, take a space,
Come over here and feel God’s grace.
This street could be for you or me
A pathway
To eternity
Come over here and listen deep
Jesus can save and He will keep.
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Well done!
My main problem was figuring out who your audience was: believers or the unsaved. At the end you said "you and me" so I took it as both. But how many unbelievers would know "tree" refers to the cross?
Overall it was good. Keep writing.