The Official Writing Challenge
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02/25/22

What a captivating entry! The content, tone, style, diction, flow are all good. The devil is not only a liar but also a desperate specialist for longer years than individual human life spans. So when he succeeds on an individual, he attacks viciously! That is what he did to your relatives. We pray for deliverance.
Your story draws the reader in, but a couple of inconsistencies are a bit confusing. You mention Charles early on as a son, but then he seems to be the grandson. In another spot, Stan seems to become Ken. Good reminders about keeping short accounts, both with God and one another.
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