The Official Writing Challenge
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That was fun. I imagined illustrations as I read.
11/30/21
This was a great take on the topic, I enjoyed it!
Well done,
Blessings~
11/30/21
I enjoyed reading this. It was a very interesting take on the topic. My initial thought was that the ending was a strange blend with superheroes and Jesus, but then I imagined seeing this in a comic book geared towards kids and it made sense. God bless!
12/02/21
A very fun and creative way to show Christmas love.
What a delightful story. You hooked me right away and I thoroughly enjoyed the surprise ending. Congratulations on ranking 5th in your level and 15th overall. Happy Dance!