The Official Writing Challenge
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08/05/21
Some very good analogies here and so well expressed. I have one suggestion: your paragraphs are a little long. Those white spaces in between seem to have the effect of making the story easier to read as the eyes jump from place to place. But I like your story very much.
08/12/21
I loved your analogy in this entry. I believe our eternal destination is the most important aspect of life. Your entry read smoothly and I was anxious to continue to complete reading it. Good job! God bless!