The Official Writing Challenge
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12/05/20
So true!
And a well-written article.

May I suggest you take those long paragraphs and break them down into several shorter paragraphs? Find the natural, comfortable breaks in thought and apply them. A good rule of thumb is to start a new paragraph after each verse you quote. Your commentary on the verse becomes a "new" thought.

It will cause your articles to be easier on your readers.
12/08/20
Well said!