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12/05/20
But it's a well-written piece of fiction. Thank you for your "anti"thesis on physics. And the fun puns along the way.
12/08/20
Fiction! It sure felt real. I loved the line about magnetism and you not being attracted to it. I chuckled out loud!
This is an interesting story. I thoroughly enjoyed your subtle humor. If you added dialog, body language and the MC's thoughts in italics, it might develop the characters even more. The message is a profound one and you did a great job of writing on topic. Congratulations on ranking 5th in your level and 18 overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.