The Official Writing Challenge
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09/08/17
Great job with this! I really enjoyed the story and the writing. It sounds like a good chapter for a book or Light Force series.
09/09/17
Great job with this!
Well done,
Blessings~
09/10/17
I think you've tapped into a genre that is often overlooked in the Christian markets today. I believe this would make a great comic book series for teenages.

This piece certainly engaged me right from the start.
09/14/17
Congrats Art!
Well done,
Blessings~
09/14/17
To the two commentators who commented that this is a good idea for inclusion into a Light Force novel. All I can say, as the creator of the Light Force, is from your keyboards to God's ear. I have a short novel written since 2005 and hope to someday find a publisher
09/14/17
Congratulations on placing 1st place in the Advanced category, Art.