The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a sweet story. It brought a lump to my throat. I think you did a great job of showing the topic too. As a new grandmother as well as a mom whose grandma was so important to me, I could relate on all levels. This left me with a warm feeling and a huge smile.
This is an endearing story that you did a great job of. Showing the greater wisdom and patience of the Grandfather along with vulnerably exposing the tendency of a young parent to push the situation for their desired reaction (control) not only fleshed out the character's well but gave us a glimpse of the wisdom of our Heavenly Father's ways with us.
06/08/17
Congratulations on your 5th place finish, Katy. Such a moving story. You did a good job of letting the story play out.
06/09/17
Congratulations on your 2nd place win in the Advanced category.
06/09/17
What a beautiful entry. Thanks for sharing your gift of writing. Congrats on you win.