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Sadly, Sunday often seems busier than a week day.
I think this is a powerful thoughtful piece. I like your take on the topic and the reminder of how important it is to take that day of rest. My main red ink is you don't need the apostrophes in Americans and Sundays. Because they are pretty, Ural and not possessive, you just add an s. I liked how you challenged this community to help keep you on task. I'll definitely be praying and I'll try to remember to ask if you are able to maintain that serenity here. You did a nice job. Congratulations on your 4th place in level 3. Happy Dance!