The Official Writing Challenge
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02/01/17
I think many of us worry about the type of war mentioned in your story. Your characters are authentic & I thought your dialogue flowed well. I was told once not to use "said". after dialogue if it was obvious who was speaking or if other words would make it obvious who was speaking. Read some of the Masters winners & I think you will see examples that will be helpful in this area.
02/02/17
Well done! Great job with this entry.

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