The Official Writing Challenge
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10/17/16
Creative and detailed. Poor Rowdy just needed to find the hope that we have in our Saviour to rid himself of his guilt. Then his story would have had a happier hopeful ending.
This is packed with tension. The dark buildings set the mood immediately. You grabbed my attention and I could feel the MC's pain. The ending was great. Some may not care for open endings, but I'm a bit partial to them. This piece is quite different than others I've read this week. Well done.