The Official Writing Challenge
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08/25/16
Lovely. I really enjoyed this tale. You did a great job. No red ink from me.
08/26/16
Nicely done. Your writing put me in the moment.
08/27/16

Lovely story, worked well for me. Well done!
08/27/16
Great job!

God bless~
08/31/16
That is the definition of "Joir de vivre"! Well done.
09/01/16
You absolutely nailed the topic. There is nothing like the experience of receiving new life from the LORD and seeing the world with brand new eyes. You did a great job describing it.
09/01/16
Congratulations Kayla on a win well deserved!
Thank you. :)
09/01/16
Congratulations, Kayla, on your 1st place in the Advanced category.

Your ending summed up the story well. You did a good job of showing and not telling.
09/01/16
Kayla, Congratulations on your 1st place win in advanced and EC award.

This was one of my favorite stories this week because of your character development.

You could experience the joy of becoming a new Christian.

09/04/16
Congratulations, Kayla, on your 9th place EC award! I think you will quickly rise through the ranks.
09/13/16
Well done. Totally enjoyed your tale of renewal and joy.
Congratulations on your level win and EC placing.