The Official Writing Challenge
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While many entries this week have concerned the crucifixion, you did so with a unique story. I think the story would have benefitted from more showing than telling, especially at the beginning. Perhaps enlightening the reader to some of the information through more dialog and less straight narration? I especially liked your last line.
I enjoyed this story. I often wonder what others must have thought about the empty tomb. Nice job.