The Official Writing Challenge
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04/28/16
This story has an authentic tone and I'm wondering if it was based on a true experience.

I can say this...your story had very salient points and will give pause to many who read this.

Great job.

BLessings~
05/04/16
I can feel the passion and angst in this story. Incredibly powerful. Definitely made me think. Thanks so much for sharing it.
05/05/16
Excellent, thought provoking story. It could benefit from white space, and proofing. I noticed errors in punctuation etc. You should keep writing. You have talent.