The Official Writing Challenge
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04/21/16
Great job with this!

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04/26/16
Your POV is creative and interesting. Well written. thanks for sharing.
04/27/16
Well written and very believable. One suggestion I have is to read your story out loud before you complete your final draft. It will help identify misplaced words and so on.
04/28/16
Congrats!

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Congratulations on ranking 4th in your level and 11th overall. The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.
Good job telling this moving story. It is a tale many people can relate to.