The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked how your beginning and ending brought the message full circle let. It's a powerful message for sure. Although you tiptoes around the topic, I'm not sure you nailed it, but sometimes it's important to follow where God is leading. You did a nice job of doing just that.
08/15/15
I was just thinking about God's possible judgement of the United States as it continues to turn away from Him.

Red Ink: The third paragraph should be ... ,but their (not they)