The Official Writing Challenge
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I'm glad I don't have to read legal letters everyday! I will say you are concise, direct, and to the point.
11/01/10
My mind is sorting through your information. I'm not sure how I feel about it, but you certainly seem to have covered all the bases. :) This is quite creative for the topic.
11/01/10
This is a very well-written legal letter!

I noticed that you mentioned that you'd written it 'recently'--just a reminder that challenge entries are supposed to be all new, once the prompt is announced. It's not a huge deal, just something to remember.

You're a really good writer--I'd love to see you write something a bit more accessible for the Challenge readers. This may have sailed over our heads.
11/02/10
I have to admit, this was deep and it took a lot of concentration to read. One thing is for sure, you're smart! :) I couldn't even begin to attempt such a thing.