The Official Writing Challenge
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You described a convicting truth of many who unfortunately do walk with false and puffed up pride; in need of our loving prayers to expose the darkness they walk in.
This is a powerful poem. I think I detected a bit of irony with the narrator and the one he was addressing.
08/20/10
Interesting ending. The accuser was in full force. Blessings, Ruth
You cannot get the religious saved until you get them lost, which is what you did very nicely. Double vision on the cross was a meaningful title as well. I also liked the bouncy flow of words and rhyme.
08/21/10
A very convicting message on the importance of not judging others . . . and viewing ourselves with "cross eyes." :)
08/25/10
Very well written and very much so the truth in many cases.