The Official Writing Challenge
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05/29/09
I loved the diamond set in onyx--perfect.

It's best to avoid using exclamation points in narrative. Save them for dialogue, and even then use them very rarely.

Sweet, romantic tale, reminding us not to judge too quickly.
Oooh, I love this one. A tocuh of romance mixed with a lesson. There are two sides to a coin but yes praise God He has made us in His image and fills us each with the same inheritance,potential, gifts and His love. I liked the ending-what a beautiful finishing touch!!:)))))God bless you!!
06/02/09
This was a great story and it fit this week's theme perfectly. This is one of my favorites. Your contrasts were exceptional and your descriptions vivid. Well done!