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05/16/09
Well-written. The traffic I've seen in India is similar to what you described.
You definitely gave me a vivid picture of your driving perils. Nicely done.
05/17/09
If this were based on the part of Africa where I live, you would include pigs running across the road and a toll bridge across the river that cuts the city in two. There's no other bridge across the river for hundreds of km in either direction so of course the game designers insist that you have to crawl across!
A very creative way of describing life in Africa. I'm not sure how on topic it is - looked all bad to me. And I felt that I was getting a bit bogged down in the middle of the long paragraphs. But nevertheless an engaging and creative entry. Oh and I liked Frogger too.