The Official Writing Challenge
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01/16/09
Interesting use of repetition to create a visual effect as well as a poetic one.
A lot of "food for thought." And written in a very interesting style that kept me reading.
01/22/09
You have some very excellent thoughts. I especially like "Is the enemy…. Disguised as an angel of light?" So much of your poem is right off the front page of today's newspaper and is so very relevant for today. I love the verse you added at the bottom.. There is hope!