The Official Writing Challenge
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10/30/08
What a heartwarming tear jerker. I love that the dad surprised little John Jacob and joined him in the drum/song. Precious.
Goosebumps on my arms and the back of my neck as I read the end of this one! Honestly! God Bless you for writing this feel good story about our soldiers and their families left behind at their deployment. Excellent!
11/03/08
I'm undone! Even though I somewhat expected to see Dad surprise John Jacob at the end, I was still caught off guard.
Impeccable!
11/06/08
Awww....I was so hoping he would show up, and you didn't disappoint with this one! Cute story!