The Official Writing Challenge
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10/16/08
This is a sweet story. It was make an awesome little children's book.
10/18/08
Nice descriptions and fresh perspective--a "feasting" tree for the animals.
Definitely a plus for this one - good thought, well written. Top of the class. All it needs is the ilustrations. God bless you.
10/23/08
Cute one, Jess! I agree - a nice children's story.
Beautiful, specific details in your descriptions of the various trees. Excellent job. :)