The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 1298 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
05/31/05
You've got some great material here for an expanded version of these people's lives. I hope you go on to flesh this out!
05/31/05
I think this is the basis, possibly evem the chapter captions of a great story.
06/03/05
Loved it - I could see the love story unfolding. This definitely needs to be expanded.
06/03/05
Very nice entry! I love stories that have a little history to them.
06/06/05
 This was like reading an experpt from a well kept journal. Very interesting. I was left wanting to know more. :)
06/06/05
I enjoyed reading something of the history of these people. This would really work as a large piece. You handled the transition of point of view well.